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 As for Forrest, the red glow from his cyber-enhanced left eye pulsated ominously, giving his partially-robotic facial implant the appearance of a Borg drone while his mechanical right arm dialed in a set of codes that transmitted over a digital subspace signal.
-Above their heads, at about the same altitude as the Terran fleet, a shimmering green field shimmered briefly followed by the de-cloaking of a large, egg-shaped vessel a few kilometers long.  It was a design unlike any other starship, as it's hull was not metal, but a substance that closely resembled a brown, rough-hewn stone.  It's surface contained irregularly-shaped rings around the circumference, spaced at regular intervals, giving the impression of tree rings rather than superstructure.  From underneath each irregular "ring", a soft amber light glowed, signifying the existence of an unknown energy source just below the surface.
+Above their heads, at about the same altitude as the Terran fleet, an emerald green energy field shimmered briefly followed by the de-cloaking of a large, egg-shaped vessel a few kilometers long.  It was a design unlike any other starship, as it's hull was not metal, but a substance that closely resembled a brown, rough-hewn stone.  It's surface contained irregularly-shaped rings around the circumference, spaced at regular intervals, giving the impression of tree rings rather than superstructure.  From underneath each irregular "ring", a soft amber light glowed, signifying the existence of an unknown energy source just below the surface.
 While alien to some, the egg-shaped ship was quite familiar to Will Riker, and as dawning recognition spread across his face, John Carter smiled with sweet vengeance.

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