current_story:threading_the_needle_part_3
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| - | Back on the command platform, the older first officer released a held breath. | + | Back on the command platform, the older first officer released a held breath. |
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| - | As for Forrest, the red glow from his cyber-enhanced left eye pulsated ominously, giving his partially-robotic facial implant the appearance of a Borg drone while his mechanical right arm dialed in a set of codes that were transmitted over a different set of subspace | + | As for Forrest, the red glow from his cyber-enhanced left eye pulsated ominously, giving his partially-robotic facial implant the appearance of a Borg drone while his mechanical right arm dialed in a set of codes that transmitted over a digital |
| Above their heads, at about the same altitude as the Terran fleet, a shimmering green field shimmered briefly followed by the de-cloaking of a large, egg-shaped vessel a few kilometers long. It was a design unlike any other starship, as it's hull was not metal, but a substance that closely resembled a brown, rough-hewn stone. | Above their heads, at about the same altitude as the Terran fleet, a shimmering green field shimmered briefly followed by the de-cloaking of a large, egg-shaped vessel a few kilometers long. It was a design unlike any other starship, as it's hull was not metal, but a substance that closely resembled a brown, rough-hewn stone. | ||
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