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One of the troopers immediately responded to the commander by slinging his weapon and adroitly sliding into the newly-vacated chair. | One of the troopers immediately responded to the commander by slinging his weapon and adroitly sliding into the newly-vacated chair. | ||
- | "Looks like there' | + | "Looks like there' |
As the smoked cleared, an unarmed human woman in her mid fifties appeared in a doorway arch across the room that led deeper into the complex. | As the smoked cleared, an unarmed human woman in her mid fifties appeared in a doorway arch across the room that led deeper into the complex. | ||
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- | "Less than two minutes," | + | "Less than two minutes," |
Scanning the room, Hendrix took in the information from his subordinates, | Scanning the room, Hendrix took in the information from his subordinates, | ||
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"Yer th' only one filled with bullshit, Hendrix!" | "Yer th' only one filled with bullshit, Hendrix!" | ||
- | "Well ain't you th' little brute?" | + | "Well ain't you th' little brute?" |
At the mention of Leon's homeworld, Hawk's attention suddenly re-focused back to the actual reason he came down to greet the doctor upon his return to the ship. | At the mention of Leon's homeworld, Hawk's attention suddenly re-focused back to the actual reason he came down to greet the doctor upon his return to the ship. | ||
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- | Leon stared at Hawk, recognizing not only the source of the memo, but also the seriousness in Hawk's demeanor that indicated something terrible had happened. | + | Leon stared at Hawk, recognizing not only the source of the memo, but also noted the " |
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- | The commander' | + | The commander' |
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"You do that," he replied with self-assurance, | "You do that," he replied with self-assurance, | ||
- | //(to be continued)// | + | //([[current_story: |
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**LTCR Leon Cromwell, MD, PhD\\ Chief Medical Officer\\ USS Republic, NCC-81371** | **LTCR Leon Cromwell, MD, PhD\\ Chief Medical Officer\\ USS Republic, NCC-81371** |