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current_story:these_are_the_times_part_1 [2023/03/17 03:12] – cromwellcurrent_story:these_are_the_times_part_1 [2023/10/01 01:52] (current) – cromwell
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 "You pull a stunt like that again and I'll throw you in a hole so deep it'll take someone a MONTH to reach you!  DISMISSED!" "You pull a stunt like that again and I'll throw you in a hole so deep it'll take someone a MONTH to reach you!  DISMISSED!"
  
-Nervously, the assembled soldiers came to attention and began filing out of the holodeck in a column of twos.  As they left, the lieutenant commander turned to the doctor.+Nervously, the assembled soldiers came to attention and began filing out of the holosuite in a column of twos.  As they left, the lieutenant commander turned to the doctor.
  
 "Lieutenant Cromwell," Hendrix called over to Leon.  "A moment please." "Lieutenant Cromwell," Hendrix called over to Leon.  "A moment please."
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 With confusion, Leon turned to look between the departing columns and Hendrix a few times before walking towards the commander, who was already taking a leisurely swagger in his direction. With confusion, Leon turned to look between the departing columns and Hendrix a few times before walking towards the commander, who was already taking a leisurely swagger in his direction.
  
-"I suppose you're wondering what this is all about," he softened his tone as the holodeck doors groaned shut.+"I suppose yer wondering what this is all about," he softened his tone as the holosuite doors groaned shut.
  
 "Now that you mention it..." Leon replied leerily. "Now that you mention it..." Leon replied leerily.
  
-"I'm from the Ess-Oh-Gee," he said quietly, crossing his muscular arms and holding a finger to his chin.  His demeanor remained subdued even though the rain was still muffling their conversation and the rest of the troopers had already left the holodeck.  Why he was acting so covertly remained a mystery. +"I'm from the Ess-Oh-Gee," he said quietly, crossing his muscular arms and holding a finger to his chin.  His demeanor remained subdued even though the rain was still muffling their conversation and the rest of the troopers had already left the holosuite.  Why he was acting so covertly remained a mystery. 
  
 "I don't understand," Leon admitted, clearly at a loss.  "What's the 'SOG'?" "I don't understand," Leon admitted, clearly at a loss.  "What's the 'SOG'?"
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