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--- current_story:the_sword_of_ophiuchus_part_3 [2021/06/02 01:37] – cromwell
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 "Tactical display," St. John ordered hurriedly.  "Show me the whole picture from the subspace relay network."
-As the image switched to a digital computer map of the star system, the highly-elliptical orbit of Gamma Serpentis Base around the red giant came into view on a grid-patterned visual.  The verteron beam that was creating the Geodesic pulse was portrayed with a pulsating yellow line that ran straight and tangential from the base's current orbital location directly to the star.  A numeric readout in the lower right corner depicted the time to intercept of Republic with the Geodesic fold.
+As the image switched to a digital computer map of the star system, the highly-elliptical orbit of Gamma Serpentis Base around the red giant came into view on a grid-patterned visual.  The verteron beam that was creating the Geodesic pulse was portrayed with a pulsating yellow line that ran straight and tangential from the base's current orbital location directly to the star over twenty million kilometers away.  A numeric readout in the lower right corner depicted the time to intercept of Republic with the Geodesic fold.
 "Destruct trigger on my mark," he raised a finger while watching the time tick down to contact with the fold.  Louise's hand hovered over a blinking red button on the transporter console as the timer approached the one-minute mark, causing St. John to verbally count down the seconds.  "Three... two... one... mark!"

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