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- | <U.S.S Republic, Patrolling the Neutral Zone. Stardate: Unknown> | + | **<U.S.S Republic, Patrolling the Neutral Zone. Stardate: Unknown>** |
John Carter winced as the annoying but effective buzz of his alarm filled his cabin, and reminded him that 0530 comes whether one wants it to or not. | John Carter winced as the annoying but effective buzz of his alarm filled his cabin, and reminded him that 0530 comes whether one wants it to or not. | ||
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- | The loud shout from Harris and the unexpected assault by part of his uniform shocked John Carter to consciousness, | + | The loud shout from Harris and the unexpected assault by part of his uniform shocked John Carter to consciousness, |
Across the room, Shannon Harris leaned forward as she kept yelling. “John Thelonius Carter!” She called out, “If you don't wake up RIGHT NOW, you're going to DIE!” | Across the room, Shannon Harris leaned forward as she kept yelling. “John Thelonius Carter!” She called out, “If you don't wake up RIGHT NOW, you're going to DIE!” | ||
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The scene shifted in Carter' | The scene shifted in Carter' | ||
- | <Planet Garsol, Somewhere in the Delta Quadrant; Approx. 7 months ago.> | ||
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“GAH!” Dadjinn let out a primal scream as she completed a three-hundred-sixty arc, ending in the satisfying ' | “GAH!” Dadjinn let out a primal scream as she completed a three-hundred-sixty arc, ending in the satisfying ' |