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As Theo and Saal arrived on the bridge, over half the members of Task Force Trident were present. | As Theo and Saal arrived on the bridge, over half the members of Task Force Trident were present. | ||
- | Minutes passed silently as the ship closed in on the star system that the HMS Republic universe Victor Virtus had first triangulated as the source of the " | + | Minutes passed silently as the ship closed in on the star system that the HMS Republic universe Victor Virtus had first triangulated as the source of the " |
As Republic nee Asgard smoothly flew into the inner planets of the system at a few hundredths of units below the lightspeed barrier, it took only minutes to zero in on the single barely-habitable planet in the star system. | As Republic nee Asgard smoothly flew into the inner planets of the system at a few hundredths of units below the lightspeed barrier, it took only minutes to zero in on the single barely-habitable planet in the star system. | ||
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- | " | + | After the ship slipped into the lower orbit, several minutes slipped by in silence as scan after scan failed to register anything new. |
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Theo "Doug Forrest" | Theo "Doug Forrest" | ||
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"Yes sir," Sheila Anderson replied. | "Yes sir," Sheila Anderson replied. | ||
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As morning broke, the locals emerged to tend their crops, climbing the steps from their canyon abodes below, and stepping out onto the fields to begin their daily task of clearing unwanted scrub and fungi away with a select number of farm implements and digging utensils. | As morning broke, the locals emerged to tend their crops, climbing the steps from their canyon abodes below, and stepping out onto the fields to begin their daily task of clearing unwanted scrub and fungi away with a select number of farm implements and digging utensils. | ||
- | One such farm worker paused his tilling of the soil, laying his long-handled rake against a nearby rock and retrieving a red clay flask with a stopper | + | One such farm worker paused his tilling of the soil, laying his long-handled rake against a nearby rock and retrieving a red clay flask with a stopper |
- | The foundation site of the new lunar temple had been a painstaking practice in decorative brickwork, as laying each flattened square red stone in an architecturally-sound and precise manner was important to forming the impressive montage of concentric circles on the ground. | + | The foundation site of the new lunar temple had been a painstaking practice in decorative brickwork, as laying each flattened square red stone in an architecturally-sound and precise manner was important to forming the impressive montage of concentric circles on the ground. |
"They don't make them like they used to," the tall, lithe warrior woman commented while studying the architectural plans. | "They don't make them like they used to," the tall, lithe warrior woman commented while studying the architectural plans. | ||
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They paused their critical review of the drawings to listen closely to a distant screaming. | They paused their critical review of the drawings to listen closely to a distant screaming. | ||
- | "Stand your ground!" | + | "Stand your ground!" |
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"What do we do now?" Bah-Ki asked Dadjinn after a moment. | "What do we do now?" Bah-Ki asked Dadjinn after a moment. | ||
- | "We wait," she explained. | + | "We wait," she explained. |
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- | As the veil of transporter energy faded, there were gasps of awe and intrigue among the gathered crowd of blue-skinned aliens. | + | As the veil of transporter energy faded, there were gasps of awe and intrigue among the gathered crowd of blue-skinned aliens. |
"You are Starfleet?" | "You are Starfleet?" | ||
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"I am Dadjinn," | "I am Dadjinn," | ||
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//<tag = Carter>// | //<tag = Carter>// |