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--- current_story:return_from_innocence [2021/08/01 00:34] – site_admin
+++ current_story:return_from_innocence [2021/11/07 14:26] – cromwell
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 "Any response to our hails?" Blake St. John asked Deuce at the tactical station.
-"Nothing," he replied.  "No handshake signal, no nothing.  If there's any communications system down there, they're not currently active."
+"Nothing," he replied.  "No handshake signal, no anything.  If there's any communications system down there, they're not currently active."
 "Bio-scans?" asked St. John as the ship took up position in standard orbit.  "Can you pick up any human lifesigns?"
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 "What do we do now?" Bah-Ki asked Dadjinn after a moment.  "You know the Warlord's mind as well as his heart.  What happens next?"
-"We wait," she explained.  "If his stories tell true, his companions will arrive on the heels of a flickering light... Like dust falling through a solitary sunbeam."
+"We wait," she explained.  "If his stories tell true, his companions will arrive on the heels of a flickering light... Like dust falling through a sunbeam."

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