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Unlike Elohsa, Meridian was not an idiot. | Unlike Elohsa, Meridian was not an idiot. | ||
- | However, Meridian also knew there were others on Republic who would have rushed to Virtus' | + | However, Meridian also knew there were others on Republic who would have rushed to Virtus' |
- | As she and the two other security guards she hastily conscripted turned a corner on the forward-most deck of the stardrive | + | As she and the two other security guards she hastily conscripted turned a corner on the forward-most deck of the saucer |
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"Is that all, sir?" he asked with disdain, still not looking her in the eye. | "Is that all, sir?" he asked with disdain, still not looking her in the eye. | ||
- | Kim was hurt. She had many hopes for this young man before her, carefully tutoring him on his way up through the command ranks. | + | Kim was hurt. She had many hopes for this young man before her, carefully tutoring him on his way up through the command ranks. |
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