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current_story:the_downward_spiral_part_1 [2020/09/27 18:45] – ↷ Page moved from the_downward_spiral_part_1 to current_story:the_downward_spiral_part_1 site_admincurrent_story:the_downward_spiral_part_1 [2023/11/13 17:09] (current) – carter
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-<U.S.S Republic, Patrolling the Neutral Zone. Stardate: Unknown>+**<U.S.S Republic, Patrolling the Neutral Zone. Stardate: Unknown>**
  
 John Carter winced as the annoying but effective buzz of his alarm filled his cabin, and reminded him that 0530 comes whether one wants it to or not. John Carter winced as the annoying but effective buzz of his alarm filled his cabin, and reminded him that 0530 comes whether one wants it to or not.
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-The loud shout from Harris and the unexpected assault by part of his uniform shocked John Carter to consciousness, and he sat bolt upright in bed, barely registering Harris' stark naked form in front of him. “Grozit Shannon,” he cursed. “What's you're problem?”+The loud shout from Harris and the unexpected assault by part of his uniform shocked John Carter to consciousness, and he sat bolt upright in bed, barely registering Harris' stark naked form in front of him. “Grozit Shannon,” he cursed. “What's your problem?”
  
 Across the room, Shannon Harris leaned forward as she kept yelling. “John Thelonius Carter!” She called out, “If you don't wake up RIGHT NOW, you're going to DIE!” Across the room, Shannon Harris leaned forward as she kept yelling. “John Thelonius Carter!” She called out, “If you don't wake up RIGHT NOW, you're going to DIE!”
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 The scene shifted in Carter's mind, and the familiar surroundings of the former USS Republic were replaced by the spiraling mix of blue sky, and alien, red earth, dotted with strange shapes as fierce, winged creatures seemed to spin, wheel and dive, in a dance at least as chaotic as Carter's rapid fall toward the ground. The scene shifted in Carter's mind, and the familiar surroundings of the former USS Republic were replaced by the spiraling mix of blue sky, and alien, red earth, dotted with strange shapes as fierce, winged creatures seemed to spin, wheel and dive, in a dance at least as chaotic as Carter's rapid fall toward the ground.
-<Planet Garsol, Somewhere in the Delta Quadrant; Approx. 7 months ago.> 
  
 +**<Planet Garsol, Somewhere in the Delta Quadrant; Approx. 7 months ago.>**
  
 “GAH!” Dadjinn let out a primal scream as she completed a three-hundred-sixty arc, ending in the satisfying 'sqick' of a flier's head being separated from its body. “Push!” She called out to the assembled fighters. “Push them to the rock!” She turned to square her shoulder against another scurrying opponent, desperate to take to the air. “GAH!” Dadjinn let out a primal scream as she completed a three-hundred-sixty arc, ending in the satisfying 'sqick' of a flier's head being separated from its body. “Push!” She called out to the assembled fighters. “Push them to the rock!” She turned to square her shoulder against another scurrying opponent, desperate to take to the air.
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