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--- current_story:these_are_the_times_part_2 [2023/01/29 14:44] – cromwell
+++ current_story:these_are_the_times_part_2 [2023/01/29 14:47] – cromwell
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 "Leon," whispered Hawk as they stood in the open doorway.  "We got a burst of flash traffic from the fleet battlecomm jus' now.  An emergency personal memo came through for you from Elysium colony..."
-Leon stared at Hawk, recognizing not only the source of the memo, but also the seriousness in Hawk's demeanor that indicated something terrible had happened.
+Leon stared at Hawk, recognizing not only the source of the memo, but also noted the "flash" and "emergency" precedence, as well as the seriousness in Hawk's demeanor that indicated something terrible had happened.
 "Dad?" he whispered.

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