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--- current_story:return_from_innocence [2021/06/12 15:01] – cromwell
+++ current_story:return_from_innocence [2021/08/08 15:02] – cromwell
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 "Anything?" Blake turned and asked Saal after the ship slipped into the lower orbit.
-"Yes," Saal responded excitedly as he studied the information coming in on the monitor.  "The refined metal traces have isotope ratios that correspond to Starfleet hull signatures!  They're coming from an area at coordinates three-five-six by one-eight-one.  Northern hemisphere, just ahead of the first eastern terminator."
+"Yes," Saal responded excitedly as he studied the information coming in on the monitor.  "The refined metal traces have isotope ratios that correspond to Starfleet hull signatures.  They're coming from an area at coordinates three-five-six by one-eight-one.  Northern hemisphere, just ahead of the first eastern terminator."
 "Have the bioscanners cleared any?" the commander asked.
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 "What do we do now?" Bah-Ki asked Dadjinn after a moment.  "You know the Warlord's mind as well as his heart.  What happens next?"
-"We wait," she explained.  "If his stories tell true, his companions will arrive on the heels of a flickering light... Like dust falling through a solitary sunbeam."
+"We wait," she explained.  "If his stories tell true, his companions will arrive on the heels of a flickering light... Like dust falling through a sunbeam."

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