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--- marshmallow_emergency [2020/09/03 02:51] – cromwell
+++ current_story:marshmallow_emergency [2023/03/07 13:23] (current) – site_admin
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-**Timeframe:  Present day (Prime timeline), Stardate 61902.7 (old Earth date: November 26, 2384), 1737 hours shiptime.\\
+**Timeframe:  Present day (Prime timeline), Stardate 61902.7 (old Earth date: November 26, 2384), 1737 hours shiptime\\
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+Location:  Main engineering, Deck 13, USS Republic (Luna Class), NCC-81371, docked at Space Station Deep Space Four
-Location:  Main engineering, Deck 11, USS Republic (Luna Class), NCC-81371, docked at Space Station Deep Space Four
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 However, Meridian also knew there were others on Republic who would have rushed to Virtus's aid were he to be discovered.  At least three sympathizers were among the crew; likely more.  Further, the known three were of high enough rank to interfere by enabling any escape plan that Virtus might hatch:  The First Officer, Chief Medical Officer, and Assistant Chief Engineer.  Once Meridian learned that Pakita was on her way down to the docking level en route to the Captain's skiff, it was clear that Virtus was about to escape.  The gig was up, and she had standing orders to bring him in should there be any hint of him fleeing Republic.
-As she and the two other security guards she hastily conscripted turned a corner on the forward-most deck of the stardrive section, they found Pakita and her Tellarite assistant with open tricorders around a containment field that sealed the entrance ramp to the Captain's Skiff.
+As she and the two other security guards she hastily conscripted turned a corner on the forward-most deck of the saucer section docking level, they found Pakita and her Tellarite assistant with open tricorders around a containment field that sealed the entrance ramp to the Captain's Skiff.
 "...Vehns, there's one more test I'd like to perform..." Pakita said to her cohort before noticing Meridian's presence.
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 "Is that all, sir?" he asked with disdain, still not looking her in the eye.
-Kim was hurt.  She had many hopes for this young man before her, carefully tutoring him on his way up through the command ranks.  While they had their differences in the past, they had patched most of it up, and this business with Virtus was tearing open old wounds again.  If wasn't fair to her, as it only served to alienate her from the rest of the crew.  That was one thing she would not tolerate.
+Kim was hurt.  She had many hopes for this young man before her, carefully tutoring him on his way up through the command ranks.  While they had their differences in the past, they had patched most of it up, and this business with Virtus was tearing open old wounds again.  From her point of view, it wasn't fair to her, as it only served to alienate her from the rest of the crew.  That was one thing she would not tolerate.
 "Don't disappoint me again, Nat," she said with an air of finality, hissing her last word to him.  "DisMISSED..."

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