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 "Is that all, sir?" he asked with disdain, still not looking her in the eye.
-Kim was hurt.  She had many hopes for this young man before her, carefully tutoring him on his way up through the command ranks.  While they had their differences in the past, they had patched most of it up, and this business with Virtus was tearing open old wounds again.  If wasn't fair to her, as it only served to alienate her from the rest of the crew.  That was one thing she would not tolerate.
+Kim was hurt.  She had many hopes for this young man before her, carefully tutoring him on his way up through the command ranks.  While they had their differences in the past, they had patched most of it up, and this business with Virtus was tearing open old wounds again.  From her point of view, it wasn't fair to her, as it only served to alienate her from the rest of the crew.  That was one thing she would not tolerate.
 "Don't disappoint me again, Nat," she said with an air of finality, hissing her last word to him.  "DisMISSED..."

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